tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34374756.post6316463419619801830..comments2023-06-01T04:28:09.457-05:00Comments on I.M. Cupnjava's Writing Café: The Writing Process: Part Two Vague PlotIM Cupnjavahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03120808235965232520noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34374756.post-88836464244362692102007-08-11T22:56:00.000-05:002007-08-11T22:56:00.000-05:00I agree with you about the "sandworms" insult. The...I agree with you about the "sandworms" insult. The character who says it isn't above a racial slur, but I think it needs to be more creative.IM Cupnjavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03120808235965232520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34374756.post-64845802707807090112007-08-09T08:39:00.000-05:002007-08-09T08:39:00.000-05:00There are soooo many things I love about this idea...There are soooo many things I love about this idea of yours. You showed it to me once a while back. The style suits your snarky humor to a 'T' (loved the line, damn, I liked that one, they had clean bathrooms. And the Enron quip.) I think you have a really cool parallel to the talliban issues while not 'dating' it by making any direct correlations. <BR/><BR/>ONE thing I'd suggest, the moment I read 'sandworms' I was like, oh dang can't she come up with something that is 'her own'... we've all read the 'scary sandworm' thing, or seen it in movies... you are WAY too artfull, original, and imaginative to settle for 'sandworms'. LOL Come on, you can do better.<BR/><BR/>Other than that... this is one you should REALLY put a fire under.Tami Phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18254839673811955144noreply@blogger.com